Hedonists glory

This poems kinda funny but true

Ironic be our nature
that we shun our very nature
Hedonism, a common human trait
veiwed as a disease
it is somehow horrible
that our desires we please
A hedonsit will always live more
he will always live shorter
And I truly cannot see
the flaw in apathy
unfeeling as we may be
we will see
life's beuty
severing lifes joy,
somehow brings joy in a next life
how may
a life of abstinance
avoidence of the decadent
the simples joys
and the insane wonders
bring a blissful after-life
He who dies young lives best
He who was a hedonist
outdid the rest

Reviews

[Denni]

nice work, a tad hard to follow but nicely worded