very short but sharp. i like it. my first thought was that you have an illness and death it is imminent. i dont know if thats right. an acrostic!!! very nice
oh man, I am still only half concsious after yesterday's glut of lysine saturated turkey but there is a word for this type of poem....and I cannot remember it, oh wait ACROSTIC. There we go. I will say that the poem is so strong on its own even for it's paucity of lines that it stands without the reader knowing it is an acrostic. The fact that it is is delightful icing to the piece.
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