Ill Fated

Ill Fated

A Poem by C.L. Wilson

I nside my head

Lies a thought

Levitating in there

Finding a way

To esape

All to remind me

Everyone

Dies 

© 2008 C.L. Wilson


Author's Note

C.L. Wilson
Can you guess what the connection with the title and the poem is?

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very short but sharp. i like it. my first thought was that you have an illness and death it is imminent. i dont know if thats right. an acrostic!!! very nice

Posted 16 Years Ago


oh man, I am still only half concsious after yesterday's glut of lysine saturated turkey but there is a word for this type of poem....and I cannot remember it, oh wait ACROSTIC. There we go. I will say that the poem is so strong on its own even for it's paucity of lines that it stands without the reader knowing it is an acrostic. The fact that it is is delightful icing to the piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on November 10, 2008
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C.L. Wilson
C.L. Wilson

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first of all i suck at reviewing (or at least when it comes to detailed advice) so if you review my work i'll try my best to give you a decent review and as a note for reviewing-I really don't want re.. more..

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