Leaving Only Ash

This is my first haiku. I'm absolutely horrible with syllabyles and dread having to follow a certain formula, eseacially the kind that have been around for centuries.

Fire is simple

but it destroys so much

leaving only ash

Author's Note

please be easy if I didn't do it right. PLEASE!

Reviews

[R. P. Coke]

i like your simplicity. it makes the words stand clear. it has great promise!

[TL Boehm]

did you delete it? I don't see the haiku.