Humans and Fall

this is being put on here for the Pagemaster's Challenge #7 but I wrote this before summer this year. I just found it again this last week and haven't had time to post it.

Like a

single leaf falling

off

a limb in the

fall time

I

once bloomed

once grew

will die.

Author's Note

I wrote in this style after reading a poem written by a famous american poet in english last year. I have a lot of poems like this that I wrote in english. I can't remember who it was.

Reviews

[Chirpy!]

personally, I can never see death in something dead and/or dieing like this,
Reading this was like looking though someone elses eyes.
thank you.

[J.P. Bristow]

Great write-I really enjoyed it...it looks like you and I were the only slightly morbid responses to the challenge.......thanks for participating and looking forward to reading more challenges from you.