A Few Words From an Angry Preacher

I can smell it in the air

every time they enter a room

The stench of pride and sin

of lust and sex

 

I gag upon their air

hoping not to become infected

with what ever demon crawled

down their throats

 

God save those people

before they become avatars

of sin itself

GOD SAVE US ALL!!!

Reviews

[~angelalala~]

this is an interesting poem. i don't know if your a preacher or not. & no offense, but sometimes i think a lot of preachers are slightly insane (sorry i grew up in a pentecostal/ holy roller type church). this poem kinda made me laugh, i'm not sure if your serious or exaggerating which adds to the charm. i especially loved the stanza "I gag upon their air hoping not to become infected with what ever demon crawled down their throats". interesting read.

[Kiya]

Amen! People should stop thinking about themselves and start thinking about all those millions who are starving, abused or neglected. We are the ones who have to put it right since we're the ones that started it. I really like your title, giving the poem more depth rather than just mindlesly ranting on about some lost cause. Well done :)