Stellar

Drink in your love

Baby you're killing me

Sweetly

When you kiss me I'm done

 

Lying quiet staring

While energies are blaring

Heat igniting passion

Desire kills despairing

We float in timeless space

Oblivious in our embrace

There are happenings around us

But those memories erase

 

Two junkies on a binge

Our souls become unhinged

They're blazing up above us

Causing lips on skin to singe

Exploding all around us in a heavenly display

Our bodies locked

Our thoughts are lost

In total disarray

 

Drink in your love

Baby you're killing me

Sweetly

When you kiss me I'm done

 

Time is like a void

When I'm laying in your arms

Coliding colors softly

Array of cosmic bombs

Its limitless and effortless

We dance in silent stillness

Your smile bright

Your eyes ignite

I know you've got this illness

 

Lay with me until its done

But for now its just begun

A beautiful starry gaze

Quench my thirst for many days

Hungry

Intense

Stellar

Bliss

Words that describe the spark of our kiss

 

Drink in your love

Baby you're killing me

Sweetly

When you kiss me I'm done

Reviews

[Greg Skura]

Nice poem! i enjoyed reading this Stellar expression. Thank You for sharing!

[C. C. Burl]

ooh, what a poem. lovely and clear imagery, with a lyrical flow that, to my mind, was like chocolate. lovely piece, sounds kinda like a song. again, thanks so much for the read request, I really enjoyed reading this. -C. C. Burl.

[Collette]

I really loved this poem...your style of rhyming kept it fresh and flowing. The ode to your lover is beautiful...you capture every emotion of falling in love, both the good and bad. I dig your words: they truly pack a punch. My favorite lines:

Two junkies on a binge

Our souls become unhinged

They're blazing up above us

Causing lips on skin to singe

Exploding all around us in a heavenly display

Our bodies locked

Our thoughts are lost

In total disarray

-definitely snap-worthy!

[J.Black]

Well done.
This is currently my favourite poem, ever.
Keep it up, please.

xx

[A Spectacular Case]

This is really well written and the rhyming you've used is very good.
Well done.