Sin

greedy mind left me with a broken heart 

we were prideful but it tore us all apart

lustful thoughts fed into my wicked counterpart

but the envy was always there to the end from start

the sloth made the lazy easy to subdue

abusing substances is gluttony eating you

full of wrath and now they f*****g hate you

 this is my sin 

 when will it end

 save me cause im falling apart and broken into pieces

Reviews

[April Blue]

Great piece, I also have a poem titled Sin but it is very different from your... I enjoyed reading this.. Nicely done...