Unreal Emotions

Unreal Emotions

A Poem by Rasha Lama
"

ive been trying to understand this hidden feeling for a while now so this poem is the closest ive ever come to explaining it

"

what a body

with bones that

melt with sound, 

blood that 

flows 

to a feeling. 

cave of 

hidden 

shapes let light 

into the darkness. 

let it 

breathe 

and live a day 

in the presence of your eyes. 

lead me 

to

the world 

of 

none 

existence, 

i will still live 

in the breath 

of your c

ave.

© 2015 Rasha Lama


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I enjoyed the poem. Made the reader think and ponder.
"cave of
hidden
shapes let light
into the darkness. "
I believe all of us have hidden caves. Places seen by few. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


I could hear the breathiness of the narrative voice and feel the pulsing undercurrent. Beautiful, Rasha.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rasha Lama

9 Years Ago

thanks so much danny xx

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Rasha Lama
Rasha Lama

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