7:26 pm

Night walks by the beach where lights on the ocean look like Van Gogh paintings and the sand having my footprints but missing yours.

Waves of your heartbeat plays 

 the sound of crashing waves, 

 trembling bridges over water. 

Dancing lights painting your bones, 

 constructing your spine, 

 adding life to your veins. 

Lit stars poking holes in the dark, 

 stippling what could be your skin feeding off light, 

 feeding off bones. 

Silent looks with leaves branching out to you, 

 to me all are up and comforting.

Built around me short walks to the coast of your heart, 

 ocean surrounding us but water 

 our air to this feeling.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

My favorite place and I loved your description of the sea and place. Your description took me with to good thoughts and positive emotions. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Confuser]

Rasha: This is a fabulous poem. Hands down one of the best poems I've read in awhile. I love the raw abstract form and every single word. You are so talented! Bravo and Congrats on your win. Well deserved. Thank you so very much. Loved it!!!

[Rasha Lama]

Wow, this made my day! Thanks so much :))

[Confuser]

You're welcome! Loved it.

[Ana B.]

Very nice wonderful poem, incidentally was listening to U2' s ''Every breaking wave'' a very nice combination....

[Rasha Lama]

such a good song i was actually telling a friend about it today! hehe thanks so much :)

[Ana B.]

:) it must be in the air or something :)

[lostnstars]

I really loved this. I love how you started it off with "waves of your heartbeat plays," and I like the flow of your poem. please keep on writing! :)

[Rasha Lama]

wow you're so sweet thanks :)

[Carolyn Jean]

Second stanza is everything, beautiful.

[Rasha Lama]

ahh thanks so much :)

[Daffodils]

A very good piece Rasha Lama :) Very deep

[Rasha Lama]

aw thank you :)