Come home,Love!

Come home,Love!

A Poem by Karen Raquepo
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But,where is my home?

"
Oh, love,my love.
Where you dwell, but in my heart.
You go away in the morning.
At home, when darkness comes.

Just go, do your routine activities.
Enjoy yourself ,but be safe.
Forget me not, I don�t say
Be at home is all right!

© 2008 Karen Raquepo


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I'm sorry, Karen, perhaps its me, but there are several disconnects in this. It lacks rythm or cadence of any kind. I don't necessarily think it should rhyme, but the thoughts should flow. It's difficult to read and the thought patterns are not at all continuous. If the disconsonance is what you were trying for, then congratulations. I'm just too old, I guess to appreciate it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice, love hard yet give your love that freedom to live his life. Well written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


it is sweet and a very well crafted work from you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like the thought process here. Keep up the good work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Excuse me for lumping all you pieces into a single review.
I like
short and sweet
the lay out
and for the most part they all flow rather nicely
keep up the good work


Posted 16 Years Ago


very good poem good work its wonderful

Posted 16 Years Ago


Gentle beautiful poem .....

Posted 16 Years Ago


Nice poem. Short, Sweet and to the point. The first stanza flowed very well throughout the lines. But the 2nd stanza alotta words didnt fit in and it really obstructed the flow. The last line on the 2nd stanza i didnt really agree with. Either way the emotion and feeling is present. And that is all a poem needs for it to be considered a poem. Keep writing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I'm sorry, Karen, perhaps its me, but there are several disconnects in this. It lacks rythm or cadence of any kind. I don't necessarily think it should rhyme, but the thoughts should flow. It's difficult to read and the thought patterns are not at all continuous. If the disconsonance is what you were trying for, then congratulations. I'm just too old, I guess to appreciate it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nicely expressed sentiments

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Karen Raquepo
Karen Raquepo

Reggio Emilia, Emilia-Romagna, Italy



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I'm simple,cool and amicable.I read literally pieces,particularly in poetry,also writing when I'm on the mode. I love to sing and dance.Love and pop genre are my favorite music.I'm fond in garde.. more..

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