Silence

just me and the gentle voice of silence

Silence is profound.
Rumors are on it.
Unspoken voice of silence, I hear from you.
Intense feeling, echoed and repeated!

In silence, I hold on
You touch my soul and I touch yours.
Unseen scene occurred by us.
And silence comes again.

Conquer me, I beg
I'll stay with you, be your woman
Rhymed silence, I do hear
Sssshhh silence, I don't blame!

Silence makes me aware of you.
I connive,wondering about us.
Does your system miss me,as I long for you?
Silence interrupt!

Oh, my dearest one.
I'm cared and loved, thank you.
Even in silence, I could sense you.
Silence, I grant everywhere!

Reviews

[C. Harter Amos]

I think you give an apt description of what silence can mean & the potential it holds for us to explore our own feelings & awareness of others. It's a beautifully romantic piece. Your personal style of writing adds to the feeling of mysterious and to the depth. Really nice poetry.

[S.v. Rincon]

I love the emotion in this. Very nicely done :)

[Phil Sanders]

Delightful writing ........

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Woh! A romantic piece with a touch of mystery to it. Sometimes silence speaks so much, i believe. Especially these days when a person is kinda shy (like me), and dosen't know what to say to such a beautiful woman whenever he sees one hehe. Awesome write!

Mikey

[Vanessa Whiteley]

Another very romantic poem. There are some wonderful lines. 'Unspoken voice of silence, I hear from you' would make a great opening to this poem and I like the play on words in 'Unseen scene' very nice.

[Ah Lecks]

For some, silence is wanted but never found, for in silence we think thoughts that cry loud to be heard.
I don't know what atmosphere this was produced, but it was very well worded. I love it.

[Angel Bird]

In silence is more eloquence than in words.

Silence never betrays!

I like this, it's very well done.

[Lauren Xena Campbell]

I often rate silence as the most important sound of all. I find it the most atmospheric. I like this piece; it flows well, and has been written nicely. Great work, I look forward to reading more ;-)