Your poetry..

I wrote this in 2011 after reading a poem that touched me like the author was talking to me, it made me stop and think to myselve how this person could relate to everything i was feeling..

I got certain ink,

that leaks from this pen

as it bleeds,

out words,

from poems,

that's sometimes 

rather deep,

only to reach, 

those who feel 

the same as me,

it's like a knife,

but the words are cut

deepper, then deep

open up your eyes,

then your mouth drops,

as you read,

can someone really feel

the same pain

as me

how is it to be,

this person 

does not know me

but his poetry 

cuts deep,

inside me,

and now causes 

me to bleed

but I continue

to read!

only to feel

he's talking

about me

tears fall from 

my eyes,

as they soak

my feet!

which now causes

me to scream

cause now

I no longer know

the real me,

all because your poetry,

cut me that deep!

2011

Reviews

[Saddam]

I got certain ink,
that leaks from this pen
From that pen you write your words....best hai ji...awsome work dude ...
Keep writing. .

[Sami Khalil]

tears fall from

my eyes,

as they soak

my feet!

which now causes

me to scream

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:).......................