Seduction

A poem about a guy and a girl getting intimate but not

i know you, you know me, 

we are two ppl, both young and free. 

i walk over and clasp your hand

and pull you forward, your in my command.

while exposing your neck, my other hand holds your cheek.

kissing you up and down, then you feel your knees grow weak.

you break a smile and pull away, slowly. 

But i know what you want and its far from being holy.

I am a devilish sinner, not looking for redemption.

And i have caught your eye, so give in to your temptation.

Like the devils own pie, i will indulge in you. 

 it might take a while but ima taste a slice of you.

my arms are round your waist now, and my lips are to your ear. 

whispering all the little dirty things, that you know you like to hear. 

your heart is racing and your knees are getting worse so i lead you to the bed. 

you move to its centre but i sit you on the edge instead. 

i hold you by your chin, then look you in the eyes. 

you know whats to come, biting, scratching, dominance and ties.

your on your back now, your jeans and knickers have both hit the floor.

i trace up and down the inside of your legs, and your body bends for more.

the stroking with my fingers become kissing with my lips.

and i have a quick intimate moment with the lips between your hips.

my fingers take their turn, and my tongue takes a pause.

all at once they double team and into the bed you plant your claws. 

Your legs over my shoulders, my head is between your legs, and i am on my knees. 

your body bends and archs and twist, as my tongue works with ease.

then a blinding light shocks my brain and you are walking away.

when i clasped your hand it was but only a brush and my head chose to play.

you turn and look, now that you are halfway down the corridor. 

and i avert my eyes cause your gaze i force myself to just ignore.

i have a pen, i have some paper, ima try pull thru 

but i dont want you to notice me, noticing you.

 

Reviews

[Javan]

Awesomely done! The twist at the end caught me off guard! I wanted to see how their session ended, but it didn't even begin!
At 1st I was thrown by the way that it doesn't exactly have a definitive structure, but it works to your advantage, because as the verses get longer, he's in the most descriptive and sensual part, but as you realise what's happening, they get shorter like he's embarrassed...

Keep it up brother!