Earth is going somewhere

Earth is going somewhere,

I know

Earth is going somevhere

I know,

But I know alone.

Reviews

[Mia]

If by somewhere you mean to s**t, then I think know it too. Again…short, sweet and to the point! I like that :)

[Great Aunt Astri]

At fist I thought this was a haiku but then I saw it was two syllables short, But very profound all the same.

[rankoranko]

well, thank you. also, I don't really know how to write haiku, I'm not familiar with form

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

Very nice thought of you. So keep it secret.A nice poem!

[rankoranko]

thanx, I'm glad you like it :D

[Rick Puetter]

Everyone is ultimately alone. And the Earth is alone in its fate. We are but a part of a much larger existence. We are alone. We are not significant. You poem encapsulates this quite well.

Typo in line 3.

This is nicely done.

Rick

[rankoranko]

Yeah, you are right in your view. Thank you :)

[isus]

short and sharp but somehow deep.. good poetry

[rankoranko]

thank you :D glad you like it