Moon

Moon

A Poem by Rifatt Mir
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Dedicated to my brightest moon - Kim SeokJin

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There is blue in every color
you are still golden to me,
In bleak and gloomy nights
That only your warmth can pierce.
So do I close my eyes, will you paint my dreams?
Or will you stay longer and color my blues?

And I wonder if it is really you
Hanging with me this lonely night
But Could anything else be this magical ?
Like a floating paradise In the darkest sky.
So do I whisper my heart to you, will my secrets reach as far?
Or will you listen to stillness in me and sing me to sleep again tonight?



© 2021 Rifatt Mir


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Lovely piece. The reader has to make their mind up to whom these words refer. Is it a love or is it the allure of the moon. Whatever, it adds to the intrigue. Adds a little mystery. That's good in my book.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very romantic piece and very well phrased, unlike many romance poems. Is the speaker addressing the moon or an unseen love? That question just heightens the romance.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 5, 2021
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Tags: Moon, Kim SeokJin, Jin, BTS, rifat, rifattmir, kashmir, poem

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Rifatt Mir
Rifatt Mir

Bengaluru, Karnataka, India



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