Love and Life

Hey Sun!When you walk along,
I don't take eyes off of you.
Do you see me??
or Do you see everybody & me?
And when you hide yourself,
I keep looking out for you everywhere in the sky.
Do you feel the unrest in my heart?
Do you hide for me?
I glance out from the bus window,when you lag behind.
Do you try to move faster?
Do you shout to make me wait?
If you are tired of running,
settle down with me.
Behind that tree with the blushing leaves.
I will tell you what's life.
I gotta tell you what's love.
You are a star,hard to reach,This is life.
Yet , my eyes are full of longing,This is love.
Do you see the shine in my eyes,
gone and recoming with you?
This is love.
I smile at sunset,I let you go,This is life

Author's Note

This is my first.Hope you enjoy the read :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem and I liked the hopeful ending.
"Do you see the shine in my eyes,
gone and recoming with you?
This is love.
I smile at sunset,I let you go,This is life"
When love is near. Joy is too. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sadashivan Nair]

Perfect I learn from your writing. Thanks,

[Rifatt Mir]

I am honoured :)
Thanks Sadashivan!

[R Smith]

an absolutely beautiful poem Riffat, your telling of the sun and the tree's is stunning and the end at sunset is sad but has a quality of the end of a great movie where say goodbye to a love who leaves us, well done :)

[Rifatt Mir]

Thanks for your kind words Richard :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice personification of the sun in this...
we all need this companion....helps through trying times...like a really good friend.....

[Rifatt Mir]

Thanks Jacob :)

[Laura Lynn]

Following the sun and it following you, in the day from it's rising and setting, until it is over the edge of the horizon, the point at which you stand vertically, a stunning perspective...nice!

[Rifatt Mir]

Thank you Laura !