dust

heartbreak

you took metal

burned it red

scorched my heart

smoked it dead

i'll heal back

until i stand

then you'll come

just as planned

ripping up

your heart to pieces

i will work

until your peace is

gone like mine

and then you weep

as i did

when you cut deep

karma left

said she'll be back

to pay me back

the peace i lack

it's going to hurt

when it's your turn

to be ignored

and left to burn

Reviews

[yona]

Thanks a lot, I appreciate it.

[Joodan]

Short and vague, that widens the audience of those that can relate to it.