winter break

describes me perfectly right now.

at home 

I'm all alone with nothing

but a ton of nothing to do.

its cold,

I've got a runny nose

and sadly I've got chapped lips too.

clock strikes noon

I guess I'll eat maybe some crackers

and some soup.

I hate this winter break

because I'm feeling all alone

without you.

Reviews

[Dispersus]

I'm 5000 miles from home on a ship in the middle of the North Sea with 80 other people and I might as well be in Siberia on a vast ice field with noone...and you know what, I'll be ok because I have myself to get me through it

Peace

[Shadowed_pilgrim]

Simple but nicely said. Makes the reader curious to know more, perhaps discuss it a little further? The simplicity is a great asset however, I love the line, 'I'm all alone with nothing but a ton of nothing to do.' Very poetic. Nicely done :)

[Audrey Bowers]

Thanks a lot for the review! I love when poems are simple so they can be taken a hundred different ways. :)