Worthless Lovers

May be I was furious with how "some men" treat their women. The words just ran all over the paper.

To all the worthless lovers,

Who treat women like s**t,

Just know this bit brethren

That you are in a deep dark pit.

Cowards and spineless maggots,

How can you ever act like so?

When you

Spoil,stamp your girl’s heart

Like there is nothing more.

Do you know what love is?

Do you care what it’s all about?

Never a worry to you is that,

For all you care about is

Flesh, flesh, flesh!

So there I call you “filthy pigs”,

Your days are not going to last.

Every moment will be filled with regret,

Coz of ill-treating your worthy lass.

Author's Note

No hard feelings men, if you are not one of them types!! This is just some intense writing....please feel free to share your thoughts.

Reviews

[jainendra nagar]

nic writing...ya we men treat girls as a flesh at some moments but its natural, we always respect girls but at some moments we wondered from our thoughts, its not tolerable or be pardoned but we tried our best to treat u girls like princess. At some moment of a relationship its good to be parted away for the sake of both, at that moment we behave heart less and hide our feelings...
thought provoking write...keep it up

[Urja Gokani]

wwwooooowwwww amazingly written keep it up !!

[Serenity Faith]

Such intense emotion. If the computer could write it as you felt, it might not be readable through angry scribbles.

[Tai Ryens]

I agree with you completely. Powerful and intense emotions flow out skillfully here. Well done.

[A Black Rose]

Very intense. I felt my anger,frustration and pain as if I was writing. On top of all the emotions, It spoke the truth! Good writing! Keep writing.

[Aehr]

true, i loved it, powerful and strong...

[MoriartyMesa]

I love when you toss the curve ball that breaks the mirror behind the bar. This could be something Margret Cho would do in her act.



Nicely, nice..



and the note took the cake.

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlande..]

women do the same thing
men and women, both in their natural state, seek spirit and flesh
the balance depends on incarnations, conscience and experience
I would say re-incarnations, but it seems redundant to me
when you can just pluralize the word

[Clockwork]

I agree with you; I am often disappointed by how others of my gender treat women in relationships and social situations in general. It is one of those cases that we all need to work together to achieve honesty and love with one another.

[Crifa]

I know there are a lot of guys like that but girls do the same to the nice guys. I have had my heart broken and I know plenty of others who have. I am sorry about all of the bad guys but bad people exist in both genders. Good work though keep it up