Breath to Live

Breath to Live

A Poem by Ashi written tale & poetry

😢Invisible but we feel every moment.
     inhale each emotions
     learn to conquer 
     drowning us in darkness
     we embrace it and 
     breath again to live.

© 2022 Ashi written tale & poetry


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such an emotional read. nicely presented

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashi written tale & poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Learning to conquer negative emotion is a wise thing to do. It makes living alot easier. Nice brevity here. I imagined taking in deep breaths and breathing all the negative thoughts out.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashi written tale & poetry

2 Years Ago

ya breathing exercises also help us to stop thinking too much and reduce stress , aniexty too.
Short yet powerful. I believe we all strive to embrace our darkness, not to do wrong by others, but so that it can’t hurt us anymore. Great work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashi written tale & poetry

2 Years Ago

thank you so much for your kind words.
Sometimes our negative emotions upset us and we struggle to quell them. Bad move. We must stand aside and let them be what they are until they pass. Good insight here.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashi written tale & poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank your for your kind comment and review :)
This is strength, 100....

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashi written tale & poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment :)
light and ashes

2 Years Ago

You are very welcome. :)
A wonderful expression of such an important topic. "I am" supposedly comes from the time man could only distinguish what is alive from what was not by saying to breath. And so I am is to say I breath. Breathing is the core of Yoga, meditation, health. It is used for relaxation, pain control, stress reduction, focus. Enough. Very well written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashi written tale & poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words :) happy reading

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Ashi written tale & poetry
Ashi written tale & poetry

IN, India



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