Little one love for star's

oh ! my little girl mother whispered ,

little one wondered

looked above the empty sky

darken and calm night,

very slowly the magic began

star's blinked out 

tiny finger's started counting 

twinkling star's. 

- Ashi (06/12/2020)

Reviews

[Writergurl]

This is a wonderful write here

[Ashi written tale & poetry]

Thank you for kind comment.

[Chris Shaw]

Visual brevity and delightful with it. I saw that child counting those sparklers. Sequins in the sky.

Chris

[Ashi written tale & poetry]

Thank you so much Madam for your kind words :)

[knighngale]

awww 2 cute. The little baby. The little baby. LOL great read!

[Ashi written tale & poetry]

Thank you for your review and comment.

[knighngale]

most welcome :D

[Soren]

Stars are such a wonderful image all through our lives. They are magical, mystical, mysterious, and universally awesome. It is a pity that with our own technological advance and light pollution we can not see as many as we used to. Nice write

[Ashi written tale & poetry]

thank you for your kind comment :)