my best frnd

my first poem

Started dis journey of friendship from
Facebook chats to
nvr ending Whatsapp
chit- chats;
I wonder wat we speak but yes
Every detail frm ur latest crushes to my untimely gushes are never left unsaid

Those sentimental tantrums I throw , u bear dem all ;
u bear me wn im at my worst hatsoff fr dat ;

Ur lil ways to make me smile
N the way you say "ur healthy n not fat" every bit of it has the magic

you have been my life saver,
My rakhi brother n most of all a true frnd
Thank u for everything :-)

Author's Note

this is my frst poem so plxzz do tell me my mistakes I wud luv to hear frm all da experts out dr so dat I cn improve on my writing

Reviews

[raj24]

its a wonderful poem Raksha, very sweet and written with heart...there is nothing wrong with it..my only suggestion is instead of using the words like U for you..or S for as...use proper words..that will make your readers love this beautiful piece even more..enjoy your writing and keep moving with things...thanks for sharing :)

Raj

[raksha Kadannavar]

thank u sir for the compliments and yes ill surely keep these things in mind while forming my next poem thanks a lot sir it means a lot