which road to take

which road to take

A Poem by Rakhsharimaya

What you do when you are torn between hearts
When you cannot decide which road to take
What do you do when two people love you
And you love them back
When both have hearts of gold
Both make you swing and sing
Warms you on a night so cold
When one understands you only by looking at your face
Another can read your eyes
When you cannot upset either of them
When you cannot love anyone less than the other
I feel the winter come, I feel chill on my skin
My lips are hard and cracked
I wonder where to go…

© 2012 Rakhsharimaya


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beside few grammar error/s, its nicely written. Sense of struggle between the two choices was well portrayed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rakhsharimaya

12 Years Ago

thank you... i mostly post these while stuck in jam by my phone. I will correct the grammar errors. .. read more
Sir Jaykom

12 Years Ago

you're welcome! Thanks for sharing.

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Added on November 14, 2012
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Tags: torn, road, eyes, gold, sing, swing

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Rakhsharimaya
Rakhsharimaya

Dhaka, Dhaka, Bangladesh



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