Goldie the Goldfish

An emotional poem for my pet Goldie the Goldfish.

You are the charm of my little bowl,

Your skin and scale so orange

Like a pleasing sunset. I extol

your charm that no one can challenge.

I am happy as a clam,

whenever I struck with your glance,

Even during my toughest exam,

Seeing you means my luck is enhanced.

I love how you eat

Like a bird feeds on seeds.

How can I forget your sweet

water bubbles which everybody heeds.

O, Goldie! You are the precious part of my kin,

"Don't ever leave me", came a voice from within.

Author's Note

You would fall in love with her on the very first sight!

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

Very cute poem, and just from your description in this one I can just imagine how much joy Goldie must bring you.
"You are the charm of my little bowl,
Your skin and scale so orange
Like a pleasing sunset. I extol
your charm that no one can challenge."
That first stanza starts this one off great here, and I loved this poem. Good job!

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[Anjali]

A simple and cute poem depicting the joy of having Goldie the Goldfish as a pet.

[Carola]

you have a lot of writing talent, an enjoyable read.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much!

[Wyrn Tiger]

I could never keep a gold fish alive or a plant.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

This is so cute and sweet! The joy of a pet is such a human experience that each of us need in our lives

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Onlyme]

Aw, this is so sweet, tender and nicely done. Enjoyed reading your poem about Goldie.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Onlyme]

your very welcome

[Fran Marie]

Your wet pet sounds like your lucky charm and a whole lot more ..delightful. She has my vote..

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[Akki]

You really expressed beautiful what you feel for her. I like and enjoyed it. Pet always give happiness and bring smile on our face.

My favourite lines are:
I am happy as a clam,...Seeing you means my luck is enhanced.

Thanks for sharing and Keep writing! : )

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot. ☺

[Nipplegrinder]

This is adorably presented. I never thought of loving a goldfish. I love this.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much.

[Arya]

Wow! you are so totally in love with your goldie and can't seem to praise her enough. Cute poem showing the innocent way you love your pet.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much.

[Harley Quinn]

This is adorable! I loved it. Write more poems lke this. I really enjoyed how well you describe everything. Keep it up :)

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much.