Yours Merry Day

This is a wish for the birthday of a special one of poet.

And here the day comes,

Full of joy and mirth.

Such events betimes rare,

When legends takes birth.

Here this meek poet,

Mere with his paper and pen;

Can bestow blissful blessings,

Only to the image he ken.

‘O God! Shower your drops

Of boons and benefactions.

Pour down your gifts in his life

And lave him with your protection.'

Enjoy your day, my mate;

And leave no stone unturned-

To achieve an astounding aim

For which you are too concerned.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I don't know many poets who achieve "legend" status. Few are those who are even known in their own lifetimes. So many like John Donne and Emily Dickinson are only known after their deaths. I doubt there are many people who could even name two poet laureates of the United States like Richard Wilbur who just passed away just this October at the age of 96. But I do hope your friend reads this touching honor and tribute.

[Raj Sahu]

He's not a legend of poetry, but the legend of my heart. Thank you for your words!

[Chris Shaw]

Lovely birthday greetings for a special friend. Nicely written.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Pooja Chintamani]

Very honourable to wish a poet in poetic language.you made his day!

[Raj Sahu]

He's not a poet indeed. Thank you.

[Butters]

Show this to your friend. I’m sure (s)he will love it.

[Raj Sahu]

He was speechless when I showed it to him. Thank you.

[Butters]

Awesome :)

[Pooja]

Yeah! Our mythology too insist us to put our teachers at the top!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[Kleptomaniac]

Beautiful poem for a birthday. I too wished that I should have a friend like you.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[Crazy Robot]

good..your friend is lucky to have you..er..good poem

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Lara Crimson]

“Enjoy your day, my mate;
And leave no stone unturned-
To achieve an astounding aim
For which you are too concerned."

Birthday is not only the day when you escape from your mother's womb but the day too when you cry and others laugh.
Now, about your work, It I'd truly a devoted work to your friend on his birthday. The prayers, the love and affection you put in your poem are something which will make your friend boast of you. The best thing I like the flow of rhymes and the fluency during reading. Looking for more from you.

[Breadwinner]

Nice poem for a mate on his birthday... I wish to write on the same one day...

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you. Yes you can.

[PoeticBlindness]

O God! Shower your drops
Of boons and benefactions.
Pour down your gifts in his life
And lave him with your protection.

I like this prayer in particular, which you made for your friend. It is very hard to find such good friends who prays profoundly for you. The idea to present a poem on birthday is none less than a present itself. Really great! Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks from the bottom of my heart.

[David-Tyler]

I love these! The colored font was really entertaining too! For the poem itself, it was really classical. Glad I checked you out!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much!