Yours Merry Day

This is a wish for the birthday of a special one of poet.

And here the day comes,

Full of joy and mirth.

Such events betimes rare,

When legends takes birth.

Here this meek poet,

Mere with his paper and pen;

Can bestow blissful blessings,

Only to the image he ken.

‘O God! Shower your drops

Of boons and benefactions.

Pour down your gifts in his life

And lave him with your protection.'

Enjoy your day, my mate;

And leave no stone unturned-

To achieve an astounding aim

For which you are too concerned.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I don't know many poets who achieve "legend" status. Few are those who are even known in their own lifetimes. So many like John Donne and Emily Dickinson are only known after their deaths. I doubt there are many people who could even name two poet laureates of the United States like Richard Wilbur who just passed away just this October at the age of 96. But I do hope your friend reads this touching honor and tribute.

[Raj Sahu]

He's not a legend of poetry, but the legend of my heart. Thank you for your words!

[John the Baptist]

Must be some poet to have such an avid admirer.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[A.Tarek]

that put a smile on my face.. I liked it so much. you have an amazing way with words

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[Ace Jaxon]

I'm reading this seven days after my birthday. LOL

[Raj Sahu]

Oh! Wish you belated happy birthday. Thank you for your review.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

a lovely wish for your friends b'day love this
he is lucky to have a mate like you good work

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much.

[Stephanie M]

This is a touching, and beautiful birthday tribute.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[AllauraRose]

This is a great way to wish someone a happy birthday! I definitely wish my friends would do this. Great poem and I can tell you must like this person. Great work!

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Beautiful tribute...well told.....

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[sette]

it is a creative writing and i truly enjoyed reading it

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Sherriff]

What a great read, really enjoyed your style, and I enjoyed each stanza more and more as I read. Thank you very much for sharing this piece

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much.

[DoormanDan]

Well, this definitely takes the cake for the best birthday poem I've ever read!! There are many things I like about this. Your use of language, the colors you chose for the font, your effective use of figurative language, and just the overall message of the piece. This poem is simple in meaning, but the way it's conveyed is powerful. Great job!! :)

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you from the core of my heart.