The Teacher

This poem emphasizes on the features of a teacher.

An individual tries with numerous cries,

To make their future better.

But they make out the mockery,

With gibberish talk and clatter.

He is that patient wick who was never sick,

Of being burned for other's sake.

'The frugal time will always flit'

Such teachings and statements he always make.

With many sights, various lives he lights,

An amicable and pleasant character.

He, who always follow impartiality,

Uplift the child in every sector.

I really bow before such a creature.

He is none other than a teacher.

Reviews

[PoeticBlindness]

It is again a beautiful work by a beautiful author. A teacher is very important in an individual's life who leads him/her from dark to light. Really the very comparison you made between a teacher and a candle is worth commendable. The sacrifice of wax is same as the sacrifice of energy and time of a teacher. This is penned well. Thanks for sharing.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[Zeldablue]

As a teacher myself, I thank you for writing this. Such kind words. Nice job.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much.

[wordman]

a teacher is a special person

[Raj Sahu]

Yes, he/she is.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Wonderful Raj. I would love to seen this on a letter someday and be given to a teacher on teacher's day. This is so good and appreciative Love it.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot dear.

[AcasualPawn]

Truly teachers are god gift.......
But now a days teachers are nothing but s**t......
My physics and maths professors are total suckers and s**t...... They don't care about students....

Keep the good work Raj

[Raj Sahu]

Oh!
Thanks for your review.

[Najam Us Saher]

Amazing, very well done. This is an ode to all the teachers who struggle hard to teach students.

[Raj Sahu]

Yes. Thanks dear.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Bear]

That is the true role of a teacher but unfortunately it is not the intent of all who teach. A nice testament to those who teach and I like your rhyme scheme and you know how I am about rhyming :~) Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you a lot dear Bear!

[Ana B.]

Such kind of teachers are rarer and rarer...it's a dying species unfortunately. Lovely write dear author :)

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks dear.

[pia]

lovely poem. teachers are blessings. they help us grow as people. in many cases i wouldnt be the person i am today without some of the teachers ive had
critique: in line 6 i guess it should be 'to being burned / burnt for other's sake'

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much.

[Anjali]

Wow.... It's so so good!! I wish I could write as good as you, I simply adored it! Beautiful

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[Anjali]

You are welcome!

[Priyanshi]

Wow, a wonderful poem.
Words are so well decorated in the poem.
I really loved it.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much!