The Teacher

This poem emphasizes on the features of a teacher.

An individual tries with numerous cries,

To make their future better.

But they make out the mockery,

With gibberish talk and clatter.

He is that patient wick who was never sick,

Of being burned for other's sake.

'The frugal time will always flit'

Such teachings and statements he always make.

With many sights, various lives he lights,

An amicable and pleasant character.

He, who always follow impartiality,

Uplift the child in every sector.

I really bow before such a creature.

He is none other than a teacher.

Reviews

[PoeticBlindness]

It is again a beautiful work by a beautiful author. A teacher is very important in an individual's life who leads him/her from dark to light. Really the very comparison you made between a teacher and a candle is worth commendable. The sacrifice of wax is same as the sacrifice of energy and time of a teacher. This is penned well. Thanks for sharing.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[Mayue Naoya]

It is a really nice poem!! Perfect!! Don't change anything!!

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

A teacher is a wonderful thing in many ways- by teaching we are taught and sometimes the best teacher is ourselves- great writing 🌹

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[Ms Paragon]

A good teacher can have a great impact on a child's life.I enjoyed the message!Well done!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[Ajh]

I like the metaphors! Good read

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Ace Jaxon]

I enjoyed this, good job.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Weeping willow]

Nice write, amongst all the clatter I like the flow ;-]

[Raj Sahu]

😁 Thank you.

[MadisonJR]

I love this poem. I have always had very close relationships with my teachers and this poem shows how amazing they are. I wouldn't be here if it wasn't for them. This is very well written. I love how it flows and how you change the color of the text to orange. This poem really stands out.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot dear! I'm glad you like it.

[Avia]

Thank you for this poem on teachers. Sometimes I feel they're not recognized enough. Good teachers impact so much into our lives and I thank God for them. Nice poem. Keep it up👍

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much.

[Wild Rose]

I made a comment on another review by Daren Formosa

This sounds almost like some of my classes with amendments

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Alexa Nichols]

I really like this. Sure, I could pick it apart grammatically, but I could do that to any published work. The point of poetry is to convey feelings and thoughts - which you have done beautifully. You just gained yourself a fan. 😊

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot dear!