The Teacher

This poem emphasizes on the features of a teacher.

An individual tries with numerous cries,

To make their future better.

But they make out the mockery,

With gibberish talk and clatter.

He is that patient wick who was never sick,

Of being burned for other's sake.

'The frugal time will always flit'

Such teachings and statements he always make.

With many sights, various lives he lights,

An amicable and pleasant character.

He, who always follow impartiality,

Uplift the child in every sector.

I really bow before such a creature.

He is none other than a teacher.

Reviews

[PoeticBlindness]

It is again a beautiful work by a beautiful author. A teacher is very important in an individual's life who leads him/her from dark to light. Really the very comparison you made between a teacher and a candle is worth commendable. The sacrifice of wax is same as the sacrifice of energy and time of a teacher. This is penned well. Thanks for sharing.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[B-poet]

A profound and endearing way to pay homage towards our educators who by today's standards rarely get the credit they truly deserve for empowering and inspiring there students towards better futures. Great work Raj Sahu. A powerful and positive message every teacher should read. :)

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you from the core if my heart.

[¿]

I so liked the thought of making the bond between light and teachers here....Well a true teacher does go through many ups and downs just for that bright kinda future of the students!
Your bowing down reflects how he/she keeps and runs an important role in your life...
Each of them are true respective words!
"👍"

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much.

[Riddhi]

I liked this poem , seriously , i guess it would be the best gift that you can gift to your favourite teacher on teacher's day , every line hat its own meaning , i really liked this poem , my mom is also a teacher and i am sure she will be more than just glad after reading this poem..
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing..
Riddhi

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot. I'm glad if you share this work with her.

[Riddhi]

Well , i will be ..

[Arya]

Well this is how an ideal teacher would be but sadly I haven't seen many. It would be really amazing if all our teachers were so dedicated and inspiring though.Very idealistic.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Harley Quinn]

Wonderful! Excellent job. :) :) :) Bravo. Loved it.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice poem, keep on working at your work..I suggest reading a lot of poetry in all kind of styles !

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A well structured and detailed piece, of course the rhyming and tense is a little off because of the chose of wording, however it still works, so the message is clear, well done.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Mikku]

Very welldepicted picture of a student's love n respect for his teacher

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Prynka]

This is such a wonderful tribute to your teacher. Very nice - hope you share this to your teacher. You are lucky to have such a guide and mentor in your life... Thumbs up.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much.

[Themistocles Parnassos]

That is great! Bravo Raj!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you! 😊