Chivalrous Thoughts

This is a poem based on power of fiery thoughts of a poet.

My enamoring thoughts that emerges always,

From a fictitious source inside the body.

They proved to be grueling for some;

Fascinating for others and confounding for many.

My provoking thoughts, flamboyant shaped;

Sometimes flaccid but autonomous always,

Seems to form a colossal hallucination.

But they depicts deep meaning over minds.

A fusillade of thoughts leave profound marks over many.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This feels like an analytical description that goes well with your space-age artwork. I admire your complex vocabulary: "grueling" . . . "confounding" . . . "provoking" . . . "flamboyant" . . . "colossal" . . . such words don't give your message a poetic feeling but conveys the harshness of the situation. This feels more like wordplay than a distinct message that really captures something with familiarity. Wordplay is a good thing, by the way.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

amazing write....keep it going...good work

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Bear]

Critique: (My enamoring thoughts that emerges always) that always emerges - The singular verb "emerges" does not agree with the plural subject "My enamoring thoughts"
(A fusillade of thoughts leave profound marks over many.)thoughts leaves - The plural verb "leave" does not agree with the singular subject "fusillade"

Review: Nice depth, your wording choices show a good understanding of their meaning and usage which is impressive since English is not you native language and being so young. Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much.