Chivalrous Thoughts

Chivalrous Thoughts

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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This is a poem based on power of fiery thoughts of a poet.

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My enamoring thoughts that emerges always,
From a fictitious source inside the body.
They proved to be grueling for some;
Fascinating for others and confounding for many.

My provoking thoughts, flamboyant shaped;
Sometimes flaccid but autonomous always,
Seems to form a colossal hallucination.
But they depicts deep meaning over minds.
A fusillade of thoughts leave profound marks over many.

© 2018 Raj Sahu


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This feels like an analytical description that goes well with your space-age artwork. I admire your complex vocabulary: "grueling" . . . "confounding" . . . "provoking" . . . "flamboyant" . . . "colossal" . . . such words don't give your message a poetic feeling but conveys the harshness of the situation. This feels more like wordplay than a distinct message that really captures something with familiarity. Wordplay is a good thing, by the way.

Posted 7 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much.



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Amazing piece of poetry!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot.
This feels like an analytical description that goes well with your space-age artwork. I admire your complex vocabulary: "grueling" . . . "confounding" . . . "provoking" . . . "flamboyant" . . . "colossal" . . . such words don't give your message a poetic feeling but conveys the harshness of the situation. This feels more like wordplay than a distinct message that really captures something with familiarity. Wordplay is a good thing, by the way.

Posted 7 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
Wow..i found it deep and very brilliant work, Raj.
Keep it up.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Priyanshi

7 Years Ago

My pleasure.
This poem is awesome! So enjoyed the elevated words and musings. Such a deep exploration with a little humor to break through the thickness. Beautiful! Keep them coming!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
Allows to me to imagine al sorts of wonderful things by the power of the words in your poem. Being able to see images through a specific thought is beyond talent. Thank you for sharing.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot!
Intriguing and Creative.........

Thoughts worth money

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
the energy source of a poet,creative

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you.
I loved the flow of this poem, it was rich in words and meanings.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you a lot!
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Some people's thoughts (insert a current world leader with a belligerent bent) can have ever-lasting effects too so why can't a poets?

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Yes, I agree. Thanks for your review.
Whoa! Deep and meaningful! I adored it from the start till the end, it's amazing! Keep writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much.

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Added on August 15, 2017
Last Updated on February 25, 2018
Tags: Thoughts, Illusion

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Raj Sahu
Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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Myself Raj Sahu from the historic town of Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India. I had completed my high schooling with flying colours from Choithram School, Indore in Humanities stream and was first in or.. more..

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