Chivalrous Thoughts

This is a poem based on power of fiery thoughts of a poet.

My enamoring thoughts that emerges always,

From a fictitious source inside the body.

They proved to be grueling for some;

Fascinating for others and confounding for many.

My provoking thoughts, flamboyant shaped;

Sometimes flaccid but autonomous always,

Seems to form a colossal hallucination.

But they depicts deep meaning over minds.

A fusillade of thoughts leave profound marks over many.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This feels like an analytical description that goes well with your space-age artwork. I admire your complex vocabulary: "grueling" . . . "confounding" . . . "provoking" . . . "flamboyant" . . . "colossal" . . . such words don't give your message a poetic feeling but conveys the harshness of the situation. This feels more like wordplay than a distinct message that really captures something with familiarity. Wordplay is a good thing, by the way.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

i especially loved the very last line!
great work
thanks for entering again into my comp

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

thanks once more for entering this into my competition, the wording in this is just right and its a beautiful piece of work, thanks again

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

thanks for entering into why i write competition, great poem

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you. 🙏💕

[augustus]

Very profound and formative.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed your words and thoughts. Our minds never rest. Always seeking and pondering. Thank you Raj for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Pooja]

It is indeed a wordplay. I like it.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Kleptomaniac]

Oh! So brave thoughts. I think you are a philosopher or someone like prophet?

[Raj Sahu]

Oh! You exaggerated the meaning. Thanks.

[Crazy Robot]

another nice work from you..er..thanks

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[Lara Crimson]

“My enamoring thoughts that emerges always,
From a fictitious source inside the body.
They proved to be grueling for some;
Fascinating for others and confounding for many."

Fiery thoughts of a person can bring the change in a society and ultimately in the whole country or should I say that it causes a huge revolution.
Now, about your work, you portrayed your invisible but strong thoughts very well here. I am agreed that such powerful thoughts are gruelling for those who are corrupted and don't want a change in a society. I like the repetition ‘My enamouring thoughts', ‘My provoking thoughts' and the use of word ‘many' at the end of both the stanzas. It is a bold read indeed. Looking for more of your works.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks from the depth of my heart! I appreciate your review.

[Breadwinner]

Oh! I should say you used tough vocabulary in it....for some I have to refer to a dictionary...but the image and text concomitantly cleared everything...your thoughts can cause a revolution... Good!

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!