A Mathematical Rhapsody

This poem shows the sentiments of a mathematician towards his lover in mathematical form.

I doubt; Can I live long rather?

As we both are parallel lines, which do not meet each other.

To understand you is a task very hard;

Before that, the problems of Mensuration I will regard.

Expressions of your face frequently deviates,

That the comprehension of sine and cosine alleviates.

Our only meeting of love made me disappoint.

It was like a tangent that meets a circle only at one point.

I promised you there that all your expenses I will afford.

As I am the diameter of my family circle, which is the longest chord.

My love towards you will truly suit.

It is a quadratic equation of real root.

In your friend circle, I was too your friend.

But I was like an Arithmetic Progression's term of the end.

Your deception make me full of sorrow,

My life becomes as a cylinder hollow.

In your love, I myself dangle.

I act as an unknown value of an angle.

In your life, I am one of the obstruction.

It seems to me that I am an endless construction. 

Author's Note

It is a little weird and humorous.

Reviews

[PoeticBlindness]

“In your love, I myself dangle.
I act as an unknown value of an angle.

In your life, I am one of the obstruction.
It seems to me that I am an endless construction."

I should really applaud this work of you for both of its parameters- unique and humorous. I am really startled how one can knit a poem, a poem of love, through the central theme- Mathematics. It is really an amazing work. Somewhere I find rhymes a little odd, but it's effect outshone by this amazing love comedy. Thank you for sharing.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks from the core of my heart!

[Pooja]

Wow! Maths is my favourite subject. Nice poem

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Kleptomaniac]

Lover may be confounded with such mathematical similes. But nice poem, an unique tried.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Crazy Robot]

Love+Maths=Humour...er...er..nice mixture..love the rhymes..er..

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[Lara Crimson]

“My love towards you will truly suit.
It is a quadratic equation of real root.

Your deception make me full of sorrow,
My life becomes as a cylinder hollow."

To mix love with maths is a very unique thing I ever saw. Love is too attractive but maths is harsh.(Sorry to Maths lovers)
Now, about your work, you have put up an awesome synchronization between maths and love. I like your similes in the poem and the colour too. Keep writing.

[Raj Sahu]

Yes, I am agree with you that Maths is harsh. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

[Breadwinner]

Now, it's a blend of love, humour and MATHEMATICS.. Oh I should say you are having innate ability to write poetry on such rare topics and they are pretty well composed...I love this composition most..

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Math and poetry. Perfect.
In your life, I am one of the obstruction.
It seems to me that I am an endless construction. "
Thank you Raj for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Raj.

[Duncan Brown]

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[Tony Jordan]

Maths was never my strong point but this speaks loud and clear of the way love can make us so crazy.
Especially loved the sense of 'incompleteness' at the end Raj.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much.

[Daz]

Am impressed... yea some lines in there made me chuckle. Never seen it done like this before. Kudos.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much.