A Mathematical Rhapsody

This poem shows the sentiments of a mathematician towards his lover in mathematical form.

I doubt; Can I live long rather?

As we both are parallel lines, which do not meet each other.

To understand you is a task very hard;

Before that, the problems of Mensuration I will regard.

Expressions of your face frequently deviates,

That the comprehension of sine and cosine alleviates.

Our only meeting of love made me disappoint.

It was like a tangent that meets a circle only at one point.

I promised you there that all your expenses I will afford.

As I am the diameter of my family circle, which is the longest chord.

My love towards you will truly suit.

It is a quadratic equation of real root.

In your friend circle, I was too your friend.

But I was like an Arithmetic Progression's term of the end.

Your deception make me full of sorrow,

My life becomes as a cylinder hollow.

In your love, I myself dangle.

I act as an unknown value of an angle.

In your life, I am one of the obstruction.

It seems to me that I am an endless construction. 

Author's Note

It is a little weird and humorous.

Reviews

[PoeticBlindness]

“In your love, I myself dangle.
I act as an unknown value of an angle.

In your life, I am one of the obstruction.
It seems to me that I am an endless construction."

I should really applaud this work of you for both of its parameters- unique and humorous. I am really startled how one can knit a poem, a poem of love, through the central theme- Mathematics. It is really an amazing work. Somewhere I find rhymes a little odd, but it's effect outshone by this amazing love comedy. Thank you for sharing.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks from the core of my heart!

[JamieDarke]

At first read I assumed that English isn't your first language. But now I'm not so sure any more. so I found Mathematical Rhapsody as you said "a little weird."
However as I read it sort of grew on me and your comparisons gave me a good chuckle.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much! You are correct that English isn't my first language but Hindi.

[emipoemi]

What I like about this is the witty uses of mathematical terminology as you describe a certain love. And above all, it flows. Nicely done! Much enjoyed!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much!

[emipoemi]

my pleasure.

[Chris Shaw]

A clever write using mathematical terminology in a relationship. That's ok if you understand maths. I was never any good at it. The creative part of my brain is the bit that works.

[Raj Sahu]

I myself hates Maths! Thank you for your words.

[Chris Shaw]

You wouldn't think so by this writing.

[Hebe]

Very unique aspect .... life can be a mathematical equation ....until emotion takes over :) interesting write!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much.

[JustNonsenseAndSugar]

Math is not my strong suit at all however, you create an interesting idea from a new view :)

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[Locke Redwyne (night sy..]

I really like this! I thinks that it's funny and cool!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[The ArK]

You were my complement set,
Our union was the completeness!
But you made me forget that
our intersection was a null set!

Just a try ;-)

Good work bro. Keep it up!

[Raj Sahu]

Though I can't understand it as it is the Maths of class XI and XII but I opted Humanities after class X.
Thank you.

[The ArK]

Ha ha okay. But you write 'mathematical poems' better anyways..

[Pooja Chintamani]

Hey ..this is very nice .if my teacher had taught maths like this,i would scored maxium .v cute!!

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[sette]

i hate math but with this i understood about how it relates with love

[Raj Sahu]

I too hate maths! Thank you for your words.

[Nisha M.]

This was a nice read! Truly a wonderful poem.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much!