A Mathematical Rhapsody

This poem shows the sentiments of a mathematician towards his lover in mathematical form.

I doubt; Can I live long rather?

As we both are parallel lines, which do not meet each other.

To understand you is a task very hard;

Before that, the problems of Mensuration I will regard.

Expressions of your face frequently deviates,

That the comprehension of sine and cosine alleviates.

Our only meeting of love made me disappoint.

It was like a tangent that meets a circle only at one point.

I promised you there that all your expenses I will afford.

As I am the diameter of my family circle, which is the longest chord.

My love towards you will truly suit.

It is a quadratic equation of real root.

In your friend circle, I was too your friend.

But I was like an Arithmetic Progression's term of the end.

Your deception make me full of sorrow,

My life becomes as a cylinder hollow.

In your love, I myself dangle.

I act as an unknown value of an angle.

In your life, I am one of the obstruction.

It seems to me that I am an endless construction. 

Author's Note

It is a little weird and humorous.

Reviews

[PoeticBlindness]

“In your love, I myself dangle.
I act as an unknown value of an angle.

In your life, I am one of the obstruction.
It seems to me that I am an endless construction."

I should really applaud this work of you for both of its parameters- unique and humorous. I am really startled how one can knit a poem, a poem of love, through the central theme- Mathematics. It is really an amazing work. Somewhere I find rhymes a little odd, but it's effect outshone by this amazing love comedy. Thank you for sharing.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks from the core of my heart!

[A Soap Mess Stories]

I like the measure of love through mathematics...well written....

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Vic Hundahl]

Nice rhythm and play on words

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Giulia King]

I loved this! So different and well written :)

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A satirical and well paced and written piece, well done, good read.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you dear!

[¿]

Indeed the image is humorous😁 but as a math hater I can look it with love cause it's not circle but heart shape!!
Then what will be it's radius?? Obviously not 4/3pie r square😀 and I would've fall in love with math if it wasn't all that areas and squares and lengths.......😯
But you're poem gives a relaxing laugh!
Nice read😊

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much.

[Ms Paragon]

Creative and humorous!I enjoyed the mathematic analogies.Well executed!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[Undying Glory]

I love this concept for a poem, this was amazing to read. I loved the different analogies you've added in this one.
Admittedly, I'd hoped you would have used the analogy of the asymptote (no matter how close the two lines may ever get, they will never truly be together).
"In your friend circle, I was too your friend.
But I was like an Arithmetic Progression's term of the end."
I really enjoyed this analogy. Awesome work!

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[Nesu]

"I doubt; Can I live long rather?
As we both are parallel lines, which do not meet each other." - Killer Intro

Very Creative piece here my friend.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much!

[Nesu]

you're very welcome. Thank you for the read request. I look forward to your next piece.

[Stephanie M]

Brilliant! That was a clever way to show the trials and tribulations of love in mathematical form!

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[Mikku]

"quadratic equation of real root" "unknown value of an angle" a superb combo of two entirely different aspects... Poetry and mathematics.loved it

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you dear.

[Mikku]

Your welcome