My God, My Magician

The poem highlights the value of god's mercy and his everyday works for his children.

Everyday he shows me different tricks,
Always he acts as a Sorcerer.
From the cluster of my pains he picks,
And he acts as my deliverer.

Cardician of my life you are, 

Your words acts as a thumper.
In your hands are my fortune cards bizarre,
And I believe the success will be bumper.

Your blessings are enchantments for me.
Paranormal are your works in my life.
I am singing your praise now and always be,
Your mercies and boons are rife.

O My God! My Magician! Keep doing your magic.
You are the only one who delivers me from this life tragic.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems

Reviews

[PoeticBlindness]

“Your blessings are enchantments for me.
Paranormal are your works in my life.
I am singing your praise now and always be,
Your mercies and boons are rife.

O My God! My Magician! Keep doing your magic.
You are the only one who delivers me from this life tragic."

It is a very good part of this work which is really filled with optimism. I liked your faith over the God. It is the very humbleness in you which makes you to compose this work. Thank you for sharing.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[Tabby Mac]

Very creative. Explaining Gods power can be tricky and your approach here works!
Tabby

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much. 😊

[Bec]

Wow! I love the way it ended as well. Indeed, very magical.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you a lot dear. 😊

[Farrsight]

This is a nice read. Idk if you've read it, but I have written a religious poem on here, too. It's about Christ, so it's different, obviously. I like how you show that god is testing us on this earth, and giving us trials, but it's not to see if we are good enough to handle it, but to see if we are humble enough to ask for his help. Nice read! You should read mine. I think it's called "I remember"

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much. I will read it. 😊

[Duncan Brown]

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[Gee]

Incorrect Duncan, you cannot change zone to vote in 1 step. Please try again

[Duncan Brown]

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[Gee]

Nope, that's even worse..

[Duncan Brown]

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[Gee]

Hmmm, I'll leave you to practice....

[Sira YR]

I don't really know how to review this poem because i am religious myself and i don't really know if i agree that he picks my pains AND delivers me, I would say that he delivers me from the pains inflicted on me by myself or the world, and i don't kno if i would use the term sorcerer or magician because the term magician can suggest lies because magicians are illusionists, but i do understand that its meant to be uplifting. This is not saying that i don't like the poem, I'm just sayin that it could be interpreted in different ways.

[Raj Sahu]

The seekers of positiveness will interpret it positively. Thanks for your review. 😊

[The earth (Titan maphah..]

nice one..............I like it

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you. 😊

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks from the core of my heart! Yes, God is great.

[Bear]

Writing on religion can be controversial the way around that is to write about spiritualism as every religion is based on it. Which is what you have done here and highlighting the mysticism many overlook makes it even more appealing. Well done Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much dear Bear. 😊

[Abhishek Asthana]

a bit different and logical one... i truly liked it...
keep writing

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much. 😊

[CMC]

I like the rhyme scheme, and I like what this conveys. It's nice to see another view on god, the generous magician. Excellent work.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you dear Chris. 😊😊

[wordman]

the closest walk we will ever take is with God

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks dear.

[Najam Us Saher]

Amazing. The way you used two different subjects Magician and God and connected is really creative.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much dear. 😊😊

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.