Entrance in My Life

Entrance in My Life

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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The poem is based on poet's love whom he always wishes from God and at last his wish is granted.

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In the deserted lonely square,
In which the sad sand smear;
I was waiting for a saviour,
who would be my carrier.

My thirst of love was too severe,
That I want one to quench it mere.
And our Lord, the God; heard my wish
and granted it, which was too astonish.

Adorable and Admirable, Honest and Amiable
Decent, Kind and altogether Lovable.
And what qualities shall I reveal
as there are none to conceal.

Forlorn and Feeble was I,
and was taking a deep sigh.
But now there's delight and joy
with my love I will enjoy.

Far worse I had lived,
and for many things deprived.
But now I will love you my dear,
and I will get rid of fear.

© 2017 Raj Sahu


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“Forlorn and Feeble was I,
and was taking a deep sigh.
But now there's delight and joy
with my love I will enjoy."

When there is a first contact with our love, the person is so elated and wishes that the love should remain forever with him.
Now, about your work, the image you paste is very beautiful and the vivid description of the love, saviour, God keeps me reading the entire poem. How was your suffering and how you rejoiced after his entrance is worth noting. Looking for more of your works.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much. I appreciate your review.



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I really liked the flow and rhythm of this poem. Very well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome ☺
Loved your poem....
I can relate. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme.
Keep writing......

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your appreciation.
Hope

7 Years Ago

My pleasure......
HAAN, that was beautiful...I liked it...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear Surya.
Surya

7 Years Ago

you're welcome..:)
Even though i am an atheist i liked it.
I am not a good reviewer, my words are limited.
I can only appreciate your creation, i cant point out flaws, imperfection is perfection because its raw.
I liked it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your appreciation.

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Added on May 4, 2017
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Tags: Love, My Life, Entrance, Saviour, Forlorn, Amiable, Adorable

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Raj Sahu
Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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Myself Raj Sahu from the historic town of Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India. I had completed my high schooling with flying colours from Choithram School, Indore in Humanities stream and was first in or.. more..

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