Convict Mankind

Convict Mankind

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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This poem is based on the polluted deeds of mankind and it's consequences.

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Mankind has adopted the ideas harmful, 
That pollutes the Earth's oceans roomful. 
Never ever the oceans complained 
Then also, the man has not maintained, 
His pollution becomes dreadful. 

Is this the purpose of rivers to flow? 
To contaminate their water that glow.  
Never ever the rivers asked, 
But the man has frequently harassed, 
The kind rivers and become their foe. 

But there's a limit of tolerance, 
The man has to face the consequence. 
The result are flood and inundation, 
Sometimes vanished the entire civilization 
And it is just to the man's belligerence. 

O Man! Where is your wisdom? 
Will you make the entire Earth a sodom? 
There's a lot of time still, 
The man, you can change your will 
Otherwise, your shoulders will be burdensome.

© 2017 Raj Sahu


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“Is this the purpose of rivers to flow?
To contaminate their water that glow.
Never ever the rivers asked,
But the man has frequently harassed,
The kind rivers and become their foe."

Another nice tribute to nature...really we need to save nature...here and there I see only the pollution and rush..I wish that may everybody read your work..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Years Ago

I too wished the same. Thank you.



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Raj - After 7 million years of evolution, we have only recently graduated from being 'dumb' into becoming halfway 'smart'. That took the last 2 million years. It's gonna be a long time before we graduate again and become wise, hopefully before we annihilate ourselves and the planet we live on. Good work indeed Raj. Namyh

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much. 😊😊😊
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interesting.

I liked the second verse particularly

with the way things are going the rivers might glow literally. lol

I posted a poem using the term sodom on the same day

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your appreciation. 😊😊
It creates few images in my mind i am sure it did same to others..very well written

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much. 😊😊
man has managed to ruin the world,and all that`s in it.now he is killing him self

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Yes, it's a very sad thing that man is killing himself. 😣😣
Honestly poetry isn''t really my thing but I liked it. I like the images your writing creates.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your appreciation. 😊😊

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Added on May 1, 2017
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Tags: Mankind, Pollution, Contamination, Consequences, Flood, Inundation, Nature, Ocean, River

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Raj Sahu
Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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Myself Raj Sahu from the historic town of Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India. I had completed my high schooling with flying colours from Choithram School, Indore in Humanities stream and was first in or.. more..

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