As a person who has lived with intense all-over pain CONSTANTLY thru-out my life, I have a hard time relating to anyone who’s afraid of pain. Thanks for teaching me a new word, tho (title word) *smile* I feel your somewhat-rambling poem is a little too lighthearted to convey the true sense of how someone might honestly be so afraid of pain, he/she will not try doing things that involve risk. Your poem is one-dimensional – and it’s a good message, that God is the one to relieve us of our silly fears. But I don’t feel you made this a multi-dimensional message to show the different depths of how it can be, when a person has some irrational fear that’s life-altering. Still, sometimes we want to write a lighthearted message as we play with some new word & that’s the way this feels (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
As a person who has lived with intense all-over pain CONSTANTLY thru-out my life, I have a hard time relating to anyone who’s afraid of pain. Thanks for teaching me a new word, tho (title word) *smile* I feel your somewhat-rambling poem is a little too lighthearted to convey the true sense of how someone might honestly be so afraid of pain, he/she will not try doing things that involve risk. Your poem is one-dimensional – and it’s a good message, that God is the one to relieve us of our silly fears. But I don’t feel you made this a multi-dimensional message to show the different depths of how it can be, when a person has some irrational fear that’s life-altering. Still, sometimes we want to write a lighthearted message as we play with some new word & that’s the way this feels (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Fear of pain- Agliophobia is a new term before me and cleared it very well by your description and words...thanks for such a knowledge... A good poem indeed.
Pain is sometimes an unbearable thing. But the assurance of unconditional love can help. Your poem is beautiful and really pulls on the heart. Keep it up!
'I weep
due to a thought of Pain"
Interesting lines........
I have never come across Agliophobia until reading your poem......
I like how you broach upon the topic for your poems and this poem is altogether different and really unique.
The detailed description you gave is also great as this is a rare subject.
Great work.:)
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Thank you for your appreciation. Thank you very much. 😊😊
Aglophobia, ah, a topic none could think to write over it, but you did it and that very well... I shall really appreciate your work... beautiful poem, Raj.
Myself Raj Sahu from the historic town of Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India. I had completed my high schooling with flying colours from Choithram School, Indore in Humanities stream and was first in or.. more..