Harsh Agliophobia

Harsh Agliophobia

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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Poem based on the fear of pain.

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O! Lord the Almighty!
You keep your eye
Upon me
In each and every stage
of my painful life.

What can I do My Lord?
A sufferer of Agliophobia,
A Fear of pain;
that wanders over me
and on my love.

The Pain is too painful
Unbearable it is,
Like an Innocent bairn
I weep
due to a thought of Pain.

In your comfort,
My Lord, the Almighty
What Agliophobia, What other
You are My savior, my lord
Comforter of Agliophobia.

© 2017 Raj Sahu


Author's Note

Raj Sahu
Ignore Grammar problems.
A little weird.

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As a person who has lived with intense all-over pain CONSTANTLY thru-out my life, I have a hard time relating to anyone who’s afraid of pain. Thanks for teaching me a new word, tho (title word) *smile* I feel your somewhat-rambling poem is a little too lighthearted to convey the true sense of how someone might honestly be so afraid of pain, he/she will not try doing things that involve risk. Your poem is one-dimensional – and it’s a good message, that God is the one to relieve us of our silly fears. But I don’t feel you made this a multi-dimensional message to show the different depths of how it can be, when a person has some irrational fear that’s life-altering. Still, sometimes we want to write a lighthearted message as we play with some new word & that’s the way this feels (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear! (((HUGS)))



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As a person who has lived with intense all-over pain CONSTANTLY thru-out my life, I have a hard time relating to anyone who’s afraid of pain. Thanks for teaching me a new word, tho (title word) *smile* I feel your somewhat-rambling poem is a little too lighthearted to convey the true sense of how someone might honestly be so afraid of pain, he/she will not try doing things that involve risk. Your poem is one-dimensional – and it’s a good message, that God is the one to relieve us of our silly fears. But I don’t feel you made this a multi-dimensional message to show the different depths of how it can be, when a person has some irrational fear that’s life-altering. Still, sometimes we want to write a lighthearted message as we play with some new word & that’s the way this feels (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot dear! (((HUGS)))
God saves us all from such pains. Sad for you!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
I wonder how one can bear such a pain. Feeling sympathetic for you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
It's just went over my head...er..but still feels it a nice one...er..

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Years Ago

Thank you.
I like the description you gave of Agliophobia which was an unfamiliar subject for me and your work verily stands over it. Thank you!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
Fear of pain- Agliophobia is a new term before me and cleared it very well by your description and words...thanks for such a knowledge... A good poem indeed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Years Ago

Thank you.
It is a rare subject, indeed a tough subject, to compose a poetry upon but you did it. I like the trust you have on God. Worth reading.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot!
Pain is sometimes an unbearable thing. But the assurance of unconditional love can help. Your poem is beautiful and really pulls on the heart. Keep it up!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
'I weep
due to a thought of Pain"
Interesting lines........
I have never come across Agliophobia until reading your poem......
I like how you broach upon the topic for your poems and this poem is altogether different and really unique.
The detailed description you gave is also great as this is a rare subject.
Great work.:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your appreciation. Thank you very much. 😊😊
Hope

7 Years Ago

My pleasure........
Aglophobia, ah, a topic none could think to write over it, but you did it and that very well... I shall really appreciate your work... beautiful poem, Raj.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much dear Priyanshi.😊😊
Priyanshi

7 Years Ago

Pleasure is mine.

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Added on June 24, 2016
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Tags: Agliophobia, Fear of Pain, Fear, Pain, Phobia

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Raj Sahu
Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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