I think I might have told you this before, but I'm not a big fan of this kind of love poem, where it's all about fluffy lovey-dovey feelings & not so much about real-life human beings living realistic lives with ups and downs in the course of love. That being said, however, I was taken away by your lyrical poem. Letting go of my need for deeper characters in a story about love, I let myself take your whimsical joyride of loveliness and it really does read well, like a fluttering pleasant pastime of nameless mostly-unspecified sharing *smile* Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Yes you have told me this, but what to do, somehow I keep on searching for love in words, but I am g.. read moreYes you have told me this, but what to do, somehow I keep on searching for love in words, but I am glad you liked it. In new works I will certainly try to do different, although sticking around with love only :) Thanks again for giving me motivation to write with love and smile most importantly.
I think I might have told you this before, but I'm not a big fan of this kind of love poem, where it's all about fluffy lovey-dovey feelings & not so much about real-life human beings living realistic lives with ups and downs in the course of love. That being said, however, I was taken away by your lyrical poem. Letting go of my need for deeper characters in a story about love, I let myself take your whimsical joyride of loveliness and it really does read well, like a fluttering pleasant pastime of nameless mostly-unspecified sharing *smile* Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Years Ago
Yes you have told me this, but what to do, somehow I keep on searching for love in words, but I am g.. read moreYes you have told me this, but what to do, somehow I keep on searching for love in words, but I am glad you liked it. In new works I will certainly try to do different, although sticking around with love only :) Thanks again for giving me motivation to write with love and smile most importantly.
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