LOVE, SEX & BREAKUP

LOVE, SEX & BREAKUP

Through her eyes I tried to read my life,
My every question got its answers,
And I realized it was she I wanted on my side,
But with time we moved away,
Few words became a part of our lives,
And very soon we called it a day.

Soon I met someone new,
I thought its love again, but this time it was just me not you,
Our conversations were long; I thought maybe that’s a beginning,
We started meeting up and soon she was special for me,
One day she kissed me, her lips were on mine,
I felt it was something,
Maybe it’s the time I should say I love you life,
But that’s where I was wrong, I was asked to stop,
We are just friends; I was just lost in the moment,
I was just troubled by the time.

In the office party, I found a new girl,
She was attractive as she was dressed in red,
Her name sounded familiar,
I thought I can take my chance,
Very soon we were making love,
And it was the best time I ever had,
I thought night has ended, so game is over,
But here I was wrong again, she said she loves me,
And I was like, please come again,
Yes I love you, maybe you didn’t realize,
I was shocked; and I just ran to survive.

After the break up, I thought world has ended,
But one sided love taught me there are other things,
Both were nice to me, but certainly sex was wiser for me,
Don’t know what the question is,
I heard sex is always the right answer,
Take my advice don’t be a fool, 
All are going to cost you a lot,
So choose the one that you can love like a fool.

Raj
20/8/17

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is really brilliant! Your earnestness & honesty is so tenderly expressed, a reader almost wants to hold your hand as you tell about each heartbreak. Such a refreshing change from the more confident tales of guys who are putting across a powerful aura. Your uncertainty is a sweet balance between vulnerable & resilient. I just can't tell you how refreshing your tentative telling of this string of events is! The last two lines are knock-a-person-over brilliant, as far as stating something profound about love & loss, which is rare, becuz it's a topic much written about. You are really in touch with your truth & this is what will always power your message with relatability (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[raj24]

YOUR REVIEW JUST MADE ME SMILE, AND FOR A MOMENT I THOUGHT WOW SOMEONE REALLY LIKED IT, THANKS FOR SUCH WONDERFUL WORDS, I AM REALLY GLAD YOU LIKED IT, IT WILL SURELY HELP ME TO WRITE BETTER :) THANKS AGAIN

[Swetha]

Very beautifully explained...

[raj24]

thanks Swetha, I am glad you liked it :) just few thoughts walking down the street :)