Making of God

Making of God

A Poem by raj24

Making of God

What’s my identity, I am really confused,
They call me by different names; they pray me in different ways,
They build places where not everyone is allowed,
They tell things about me that even I am not aware of,

I say I am one; I have created you all as one,
They say we are different, than how can you be one,

I say you all are part of me,
They say we haven’t seen you, than how can we be part of you,

I say religion is trust, you can chose it, you can change it,
They say who you are to teach us about religion,
Here only we decide who should follow whom,
We create Hindus, they create Muslims, that’s how our religion works,

I say pray me like a lover, care for everyone like you are in love,
They say we fight for you like we just don’t know what actually love is,

I say these are not my teachings, I never taught anyone to fight,
They say your teachings don’t work for us, we sell hate and people buy it,

I say, do you care for people who die because of hunger,
Do you care for children who lose their parents, do you care for those tears,
They say, yes we care, and we care if they survive, but we just don’t let them,
We kill them slowly, first by taking love out of them, then their souls by killing their lives,

I say what about those girls; I created them with lot of love and care,
They are your mothers, they are your sisters, they are your daughters, don’t you see them,
Yes we see them differently, that’s why we treat them differently,
We break them softly, they don’t make noise, they scream and that’s what we don’t like,
We hit them, we rape them, we play with them, but what’s our fault no one takes their side,

But you do it all on my name, I am the one you pray, but still you say I am your God,
Our God is faith, neither you nor anyone else,
We sell what makes people kill each other, 
We make them believe in a God that’s created by words,
For them you are unsafe, your identity is in danger,
If they really believe in you, do you think they can kill the ones created by you?
We give them the faith, a faith they don’t have in their own God, in you,
You don’t have a place God, not in the palaces people have made for you,
You don’t have a story of your own, they don’t see you, they just speak about you,
Your identity is just in the stories created by people like us,

Stories, I am just a story after all, a God made by you,
My making, not like that of a toy, but of a weapon,
A weapon, that doesn’t kill, that just burns the hearts, just burns the hearts.

Raj

© 2015 raj24


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It is the truth we all created by God a very intelligent artist of this universe, but here you showed a complete picture of human mind, "I'm the one, I have created you all as one" true line there is no any differnece in God's eye but in our eyes. We have seen many fighting for religion, I don't know what is religion in there eyes and God.

As I know there is two ways in accepting God, one is 'Saguna Bramha' and the other is 'Nirguna Bramha'. Saguna brahma tells doing worship of God in Idol and Nirguna bramha means absolute spirit and pure consciouness. Don't make it more complicated and make his identity confusing even too God. Our soul is part of the super soul as I believe.

He teaches us the essence of life, through all the religions which we created here, but here people make religion as their identity not more than that.

Your point is exactly agreeable that we can see people dying with hungry while somebody wasting food in luxurious way. The point of orphans and their treat from people is very pathetic. Treating of is reallt heart wrenching. This poem touched my soul Raj ver nicely written.

According to me one has to feel God, never try to find him, one can't with his naked eyes. He is within ourself, our soul is pary of him.

Posted 9 Years Ago


raj24

9 Years Ago

In Bhagwat Geeta its been said religion is trust which u can put into thing n it can be ur religion .. read more
Prabha Salimath

9 Years Ago

When it tastes delicious it doesn't matter long stuff or short, thanks for sharing.
nice to see you back...very well written..
I say I am one; I have created you all as one,..this is the only truth...:))

Posted 9 Years Ago


raj24

9 Years Ago

Back..ya...m bit lazy so m kind of makin comebacks again n again..😊..m glad u liked it..btw hows .. read more
anne

9 Years Ago

fine... few vacations left..:))

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