The Pulse Stopped

Its something i wrote for a friend, when her father expired, its painful to let go someone.

The Pulse Stopped

The pulse stopped, so have I, 

I was supposed to move on, but how could I. 

Touch of your hand is still there, 

Every time I look back I find you here.

How can I forget the strength you gave me? 

How can I resist the pain your absence gives me?

It’s hard to forget the moments I walked holding your fingers all the time, 

It’s hard to stop crying thinking how much I miss you dad all the time.

My first day at school & you leaving me on the door, 

I still remember your smile saying don’t worry I will always be there to hold.

Whenever I lost, whenever I won, 

It was just you dad who made me to move on.

Last night I saw you in my dreams, 

I thought I lost you, but no you are still here, saying Hi to me.

Your last moments they still hurt,

But I know I have to smile,

Because somewhere I know you want me to smile, 

Today the pulse has stopped, so have I,

But telling you truth dad, I miss being on your side.

RAJ

 

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

very touching, moving write that shows the empathy that you feel for them.. Loss is such a difficult thing.. you feel like part of you is missing.. like part of you died that day... the shock of knowing that things will never be the same.. that you will never see them again.. the memories become your comfort and your curse as waves of emotion try to drown you in despair.. during those times, it was a blessing, I am sure, to have a friend like you.. very real, honest, beautiful piece...

[raj24]

Thanks April....you need people around you to support at those moments...unfortunately that friend was not in my country..i wrote it for when i got the news just to make her feel better..i am glad you liked it..:)

Raj

[Summer Rose]

i love this so so much this is beautiful

[raj24]

Thank you Summer, i m grateful that u liked it..:)

[Norah]

Excellent, I loved it because I can relate to it. Great job Raj.

[raj24]

Thanks Norah, i just tried my best to express a persons feeling at that moment of time when someone so dear as our parents is gone..thanks again..:)

[priya]

It made me cry...and i dont think there is anything more to say...

[raj24]

i am just wondering what to say after u just said..thanks for reading it..i felt nice :)

[priya]

it was sad and depressing but at the same time it is a wonderful poem... :)

[Edward Lancheister]

quietly good expression poem with a good rhyme.

keep the good work and advancing

[raj24]

Thanks Edward, ...will surely work hard:)

[Edward Lancheister]

your welcome :)