Love Me Again

Love Me Again

A Poem by raj24

Love me again

 

Morning dew,

Caressing my face,

That’s how I felt,

When you touched my lips,

Your slow moves made me go wild, 

Deep into the dreams,

That I fantasized all night.


As you came close,

I smelt you in my body, 

Even with my eyes closed,

I felt you, all over me,

As your fingers played with my hair,

Their tangled looks, 

Their fall on your face, 

It made me a girl lost in her dreams.


The desire to hold you,

Was strong, 

I wanted to push you back,

Towards the wall,

As you moved far,

I looked at you, 

Caressed your every move,

With my dreamy looks.


That look in your eyes, when I got dressed, 

Made me fell in love with myself again,

I never found myself so lost, 

Lost into the moment,

Lost into the love that made us one.


Standing in the balcony,

Feeling the air, 

I saw you looking at me,

Noticing the way,

The wind was making me its prey,

When you hugged me from behind,

My every breath, my every dream,

Became a moment that just meant for you and me.


As the clouds began to drop,

I loved the way you covered me,

In your arms, 

Like the first drops of rain,

Finding their place into the sea arms.


As the day ended,

I felt I am all alone, 

You have became me,

And I am you, 

With my every part wishing,

For your love,

To touch me again, 

Slowly, like music,

A journey without an end.

 

Raj

© 2018 raj24


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This poem is like a bursting jar of expressions. The way you portray your feelings is remarkable, and it seems infinite the depth of your feelings toward your beloved someone. Powerful metaphors, similes and imagery are apparent all over the piece. Thanks for the share, Raj.

W.H.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

raj24

10 Years Ago

u know what, u just gave me the confidence to write more....Thanks for the nice words.

.. read more
Wall Hermitt

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome



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Beautiful love story within these lines, and you did a fantastic job of describing how the main character feels at the slightest touch throughout the poem. This was a great pleasure to absorb my friend, keep it up!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

raj24

10 Years Ago

Thanks Ashira... thanks for the beautiful review :)

Raj
Simply beautiful. The description of love is heartwarming and I think that everyone who loved once can relate to those feelings inside them, it did for me. Powerful and magical, this is a very good piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

raj24

10 Years Ago

love flows without much effort...thanks for liking it..n ur reviews r really wonderful..thanks..:)read more
Dandelion

10 Years Ago

True, love is everywhere. You're welcome!
"The way you walk,the way you talk,the way you smile sets me off"- A seriously romantic piece.I am not into all this stuff a lot, but your diction was perfect to create an atmosphere to hook me in.A bit of syntactic error in the first line of fourth stanza." The look in your eyes".Rest all takes me to a wonderland. :) keep writing amigo.

~Sophy

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

raj24

10 Years Ago

just corrected that..thanks for pointing it out...:)..well i am glad u liked it..:)..thanks for read.. read more
Sophy Freebirds

10 Years Ago

You are welcome muchly. :)
Wow..such a lovely write that was..
Your choice of words is amazing...there is a beautiful flow in your poems which binds me to keep reading...
-Anahat :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

raj24

10 Years Ago

i am glad u liked it...love in itself is a beautiful poem..we are just trying to recreate it..isn't .. read more
Anahat

10 Years Ago

Yup very true ...we just put describe love in our own words and meanings 😃
This is one of the most romantic poems i have ever read...very beautiful, creative...in short..its amazing... :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

raj24

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Thank you....:)...i mean even i lost my words..thank you once again :)
priya

10 Years Ago

my pleasure raj... :)
This poem is like a bursting jar of expressions. The way you portray your feelings is remarkable, and it seems infinite the depth of your feelings toward your beloved someone. Powerful metaphors, similes and imagery are apparent all over the piece. Thanks for the share, Raj.

W.H.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

raj24

10 Years Ago

u know what, u just gave me the confidence to write more....Thanks for the nice words.

.. read more
Wall Hermitt

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome
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S.F
The poem is heart-captivating. It's words radiate love and passion. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

raj24

10 Years Ago

Thank you, thank you.....love with passion..there is nothing more beautiful than that...
Wow, the word choice and the way you have written this is all so perfect. Very well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

raj24

10 Years Ago

Thanks Crystal for the nice words...it will give confidence to write better..love speaks the best la.. read more

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Added on July 19, 2014
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