A Blue Sky

Dying is a tragic thing.

 Puddles splash.

Black shoes begin to damp.

Looking upon.

A blue sky.

Only to find.

That she is gone.

And here I am.

A blue sky.

"I'll miss her."

I say.

While I look up.

Clouds.

Floating aimlessly across.

Heaven. 

 The last time.

The last thoughts.

Looking down.

Puddles.

Not from rain.

Sobs.

Not my own.

Slipping into the darkness.

One last time.

I'll be with you soon.

A Blue Sky.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

its about death btw, in case you couldnt tell

Reviews

[-Aurelia Mirella]

I think this is lovely.

Even though it's about something so depressing as death, you made it sound 'relieved' in a sense. The person, to me, was acting like he wanted to be up in the sky, in the heavens.

I thought this was wonderful.

Great job. :]

Always,
-Aurelia Mirella

[bluessadmood]

yes death is sad,life is sad
life is sad so it leads to death,
i never loved you life,dont want to get used to you addicted to you
so when its time and i have to leave,cause i never loved my stay
its cruel yes,so never tell me how pretty life is since to death it ends
i like to to be prepared ,nothing on hand so when its time
nobody will cry cry over me
i will easy say goodbye
That she is gone.
And here I am.
A blue sky.
"I'll miss her."
I say.
sad ,very sad words but true very true,i loved the way you made the scene so haunted with death i could almost feel standing with you while saying the last goodbye to her,great writing

[Ally Baker]

okay, i know i already reviewed this butttt, im gonna review it again :]
luhvvv it, such an easy flow to it. ohhhhhhhhhhhh and btw i loveee ur pic, its soooo soooo pretty :]

ur gonna be like a totally famous poet one day! (hopefully before you die!) haha, sorry but like all the famous poets of today are dead no sooooo ya haha,
okay well yea, if you dont mind, im gonna try to spam this :]

[fireblossom]

It's lean allowing the word pictures to tell the story. Well written.

[Ally Baker]

okay i know this is gonna sound kinda cheesy or whatever,
but ur deep,
keep writing, i luhv luhv luhvvvvv your poems kelley