Whenever

I actually have this poem printed out and taped over my mirror in my room.

 Whenever I see you

My breath is stolen from me

And I can’t think clearly

It seems like a dream

And I don’t want to wake up

Whenever I see you

The whole world seems to fall away

And it seems all I can do is gaze

I have this funny feeling

And it won’t leave

And whenever I see you

You seem so untrue

But there you are

Maybe it’s bizarre

But, I think I love you

And whenever I see you

I just fall in love

Again

And

Again

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

oh such is love ,it takes us off our feet ,strange feelings
its like its like a dream like the whole world looks different
we feel light we feel dizzy but we like the feeling
even if it was untrue we try convince ourselves its very true and real
even if its not true,we try to feel its real love and very true
wonderful,pretty words ,so nice feelings,
thats how love is
it may be a joke still we very much believe,lovely writing

[beancountersar]

This is simply a wonderful piece here. I love the flow, simplicity, yet directness of the poem.
Bravo...well done!

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

this was lovely!!!the feeling of being is love is hard to manage, but in this, you did an excellent job of capturing the emotion of it!!!

awesome!!

~may