How I wish

How I wish

A Poem by Laraine Davis
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About someone that I regret ever making them leave.

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 Some Words Are Meant To Be Said

"I Love You" Are Three Words I Yearn For From You

How I Wish That I Could Only Be Held By You Again

For I Miss Your Touch

Your Smell

Your Love

Your Everything

I Regret The Day Everything Went Wrong

And Actions Seemed To Not Travel Their Already Worn Path 

Like My Love For You 

And Yours For I

Now As I Look Back On What Was

I Want What Was To Be What Is Now

To Speak Through My Emotions Clearly

I Will Simply Say

I Love You 

I Miss You

I Wish That You Had Never Gone Away

That I Had Never Wished Upon A Star

For My Love To Leave My Heart

To Depart

And To Never Return

Not Even Upon My Begging Requests

I Shall Bid You

Goodbye

Missing You 

Before You Even Left

It Took Me Until This Day

To See

What My Heart Was Telling Me

And Now That I Have Heard

You Have Given Up

Packed Your Bags

And Left

You Won't Come Back

You've Found Your Next Victim

I Am Only A Not So Vivid

Memory To You

But To Me

You Are More Than Just A Memory

You Are A Part Of Me

Or Shall I Say

You Were A Part Of Me

The Part Of My Heart That Belonged To You

You Ripped It Out

But That Is A Lie

I Was The One Who Ripped It Out

And I Threw It In Your Face 

Screaming "Get Lost."

And So You Did

How I Regret

How I Wish

You Hadn't Listened 

And Then You Would Still Be Here

Holding My Hand

And We Would Be

Laughing 

and 

Smiling

Joking About Our Past

How I Wish

I Could Take It All Back

And Be With You 

My Love

My One And Only

 

© 2008 Laraine Davis


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oh regrets of the past,it plays hard on our nerves
you wish you have never sent him away,and youfeel sorry for it
and think how lovely it would be if he did not walk out
then you are still holding hands still feel him close
you sure are great at writing romance ,you do it so well ,you captivate your reader
you have a wonderful way of showing emotions in a pretty way,i love your style you sweet words
really you do a great job ,i really loved it,wonderful writing ,very nice to read

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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oh regrets of the past,it plays hard on our nerves
you wish you have never sent him away,and youfeel sorry for it
and think how lovely it would be if he did not walk out
then you are still holding hands still feel him close
you sure are great at writing romance ,you do it so well ,you captivate your reader
you have a wonderful way of showing emotions in a pretty way,i love your style you sweet words
really you do a great job ,i really loved it,wonderful writing ,very nice to read

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh my goshhhhh kelley! wow. i was looking through all of your poems and finally found one that i havent read! and im surpirsed i havent read this one! its soooo so so soooo great! i love it!! it was very deeep, and made my eyes water with tears. i really do swear that if you ever stop writing im going to make u sorry!! you have such a gift and great talent for putting words together to trigger emotions and tell stories! i love all of the stuff you've written! ohhh and btw thanks so much for like turning me onto this site during the summer and like getting me to start writing poems and everything. it was totallyyy a terrificly great thing for me! :] anywho back to you. haha that rymthed. sorry. lol. you have such great poems with terrific diction and flow and i just luuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhvvvvvvvvvvvvv all of them :] you are totally like veryyyy talent ms dino. i would swear on my ipod to it. and that means something considering my ipod is just kinda my whole entire life :] your amazing at this. such great talent you have. and it was so not wasted on you in any wayy, you are the perfect person to have such talent. okay now i think im writing too much. im home instead of going to school on wildcat day sooo im a little bored and looking for stuff to do and i think im just like writing lotsa stuff to you to fill my boredness and stuff. OHH idk if you've looked at it already. but i finally came up with a good idea that i liked for my novella and it SHOULD be my featured writing on my page. Its called "The Colony." go check it out if you havent. its gonna be like a kind of love story that has to do with like the lead characters falling for each other while not being able to trust eachother 100 percent while like fighting aliens, haha yes i am quite weird i knowww. i think it would be something that would interest your imagination and stuff lol thanksssss :]

Luhv you!!
~~Ashley A

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel this way about someone...Wouldn't it be nice if we could take back what we did????
But you can't...this way very deep, and it almost mad me cry(believe it or not)
I think that when you can trigger such strong emotions such as what happened and how i felt when i read this, that means that you have a wonderful gift!!!

keep writing!!!!!!!

~may

Posted 16 Years Ago


Great Poem
I know the feeling like they say "you dont know what you have until you have lost it"
there are times where we make some really stupid decisions
but we have to keep our heads up high and only learn from our
mistakes... thanks for sharing your poem
Best wishes

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Laraine Davis
Laraine Davis

Atlanta, GA



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