His Ballet

His Ballet

A Poem by Rainee Whiting
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Addiction

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His Ballet

 

My hand slips into his,

again he takes the lead.

I do as he instructs,

as what he offers me, I need.

 

He delivers me to the stage,

his orchestra of demons begins to play.

Again I twirl in his flame,

the black swan of his ballet.

 

I weep as I perform,

his immoral-choreography,

His laugh wicked as the last pirouette,

sends me to my knees.

 

Rainee

© 2016 Rainee Whiting


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Concise, metaphorically accurate, powerful. Thanks.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rainee Whiting

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
You're writing style has changed since I started reading your stuff. It's insanely emotional. Great and heartbreaking

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rainee Whiting

8 Years Ago

Art imitates life.... Thank you.
Wow. This is flamingly goooood...:)............................

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rainee Whiting

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are welcome. ...::::))))

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Rainee Whiting
Rainee Whiting

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