Salvation

A Poem by Rainee Whiting

Salvation

A promise of salvation

as she wades into the tide.

Mouth moist with salted sea,

and tears she has cried.

A promise of redemption,

as she slips beneath the waves.

Here beneath the water,

can souls like hers be saved?

Rainee

© 2016 Rainee Whiting

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Richard🖌

Yes, they can, Lady Rainee ⁓*

A soul like hers is precious to behold … you stir the senses and the deepest emotions ever-so beautifully, M'Dear, a poet's poetess you truly are!

Hugs `n brightest blessings of warmest thanks! ⁓ Richard

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Richard🖌

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quasi-Motorolla

Short and beautiful. I love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nwang

wish it was a little bit longer, but great writing.Loved it.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Paul Bell

Would love to see three more verses of this, great last line.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on August 2, 2016
Last Updated on August 2, 2016
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Rainee Whiting

Las Vegas, NV

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