for you

 

HERE 

for you

my tears

i put them in a jar for you

put your name on every single one

here

for you

 

HERE

for you

my cutts and scars

your name is written in blood

on my arm

here

for you

 

HERE

for you

roses

for my grave

put them right under my name

here

for you

 

Author's Note

......well heres to you zach......i love you....

Reviews

[SheWhoWillNotBeNamed]

I really luv this one!

[Spookers]

"my cutts and scars" it should be "cuts" instead of "Cutts"
I like it, though it seems a bit extreme. But the best poems always seem so.

[Aarontastic]

Very pretty :) The way you structured the poem out of terse statements makes it seem breathless, like hushed little whispers. The second stanza used some hackneyed imagery, but it doesn't really bring down this poem because you formatted it so perfectly. Nice job.

[Sarah]

very simple but very nice

[Draven]

Well then, that was a very simple poem. It has some ambivolence to it. In a way I dont like it, and think it needs work. Yet it is also very deep and emotional. Nice job.

[Winters_Lost_Walk]

Love is the strongest emotion one can ever feel, and the depths we go to for the ones we love are unbelievable. It is also the most difficult emotion to get rid of, as it will keep on bugging you. In time, it might fade away, but the scars will remain in our arms, and in our hearts. Beautiful writing.

[BeccaB]

aww this is so touching simple and amazing ^_^

[paparapapa]

dark but beautiful. I loved the repetitions. Great work. ;)

[Joshua]

Very good piece there. The word "Cuts" in the second stanza was misspelled, but that's the only error I can see here and the wording you have chosen is simply amazing!

[Canicus]

Well done, I like the second stanza. Good write